Tuesday, October 20, 2009

The Fire Still Burns!

I stand in the doorway and
the wind blows into my face,
The fire's still burning, but
I feel no warmth, as I watch you go

Minutes ago, I was holding you
so tight, I thought...
I would never let you go, and minutes later...
you decide it's time to go...
the fire's still burning baby.. but
I feel no warmth, as I watch you go...

I fall down, writhe in pain...
Pick me up baby, the fire's still burning...
Where's the love gone? I plead..
The fire still burns babe...but
I feel no warmth, as I watch you go..

As I watch the black satin vanish, and
the last drop of tear hits the ground,
For one last time baby, say to me..
that you love me, I'll find comfort in pain...
It's then I decide, the fire will burn forever
though I'll feel no warmth, as I let you go...
And as I let you go....






5 comments:

Shuv... said...

Dude..Its awsome..great pice of work... i jss think about the foolish girl is ,, whom you have let to go..Its lovely yaar ..
With ya permission , can i dedicate it to ma lost love...

Shuv... said...

Dude..Its awsome..great pice of work... i jss think who the foolish girl is ,, whom you have let to go..Its lovely yaar ..
With ya permission , can i dedicate it to ma lost love...

Avishekh Das said...

Sure man...It's for all u guys ot there who hav let their love go!

sona said...

wow dear...
it's really so gud...
real feelings...

Unknown said...

omg... dis is such true feelings! dis realy means alot... i can relate to it cmpletly! man i jst love ur poems!! dis 1 s da best!!